I used important details.

I used many different and descriptive words.

When I added details, I didn't wander from

the main idea. I remembered my Topic Sentence

and the subject of the Writing Prompt and

stayed on course.

I used words that helped people see my

meaning. They could use all of their  senses to

feel and even hear my meaning.

I organized my ideas in a logical way.

I used different kinds of sentences and didn't start each one with the same word.

My composition answered the question in the prompt.

I made every effort to make my writing legible. My spelling and grammar were the very best.

I tried to explain my main idea, the one in my Topic Sentence, but I could have added more information or supporting detail.

My choice of words is good. My vocabulary choices serve a purpose. I didn't use too many extra or unnecessary words.

Once in a while my thoughts wandered away from the subject or I didn't totally answer the question in the Writing Prompt.

My sentences were pretty good, but they are mostly the same kind of sentence. The sentences could be shorter and more to the point.

My story was a little bit disorganized.

I could have been a little neater and I know I wasn't watching my spelling and grammar too carefully.

My ideas needed to be connected. I don't think every idea I had fit with the topic.

The reader can usually see my point.

I need to make my points more clearly. I needed to stay on the subject.

My words need to be stronger and more effective.

There weren't many details or supporting ideas in my composition.

I sometimes repeated the same idea and my writing was choppy. My sentences could have been shorter and to the point.

My paragraphs didn't have "flow". My ideas were choppy.

My handwriting was sloppy and I didn't check over my spelling.

I didn't pay attention to the question. My story wandered.

People couldn't tell what my ideas were about the subject.

I need to get organized. I could have outlined my ideas before I started to write.

I started all of my sentences the same way and didn't use descriptive words.

I need to add details and more information.

I had so many spelling and grammar mistakes that people were distracted and couldn't pay attention to what I was saying.